Monday, April 18, 2005

lament

The other M writes again :-)

All I have are
Words and phrases that flutter
Into my head, shaken
By some creative breeze.
An untidy heap.
They slip
Through the rake of my pen;
My thoughts crackle
With the static of frustration.

If you buried an
Autumn leaf
In the dark soil of
Longing,
Would it sprout ?

Labels:

14 Comments:

Blogger morpheus said...

poetry always left me a bit puzzled.....this is no exception...maybe i think too much..or jus tht i dont !!!!!

1:17 pm  
Blogger Indu M said...

If you buried an
Autumn leaf
In the dark soil of
Longing,
Would it sprout ?


I think it just did...

9:33 pm  
Blogger ~phobiac~ said...

humm...now why cant I write like that ?...

The other ~phobiac~ writes again :-)

All I have are
ctrl+c and ctrl+v that flutter
Into my brain, copied
from some creative coding.
An untidy logic.
They slip
Through the rake of my keyboard;
My compliers crackle
With the static of frustration.

If you coded a
cobol application
In the dark soil of
mainframes,
Would it work ?

4:11 am  
Blogger Sridhar said...

@phobiac

If you coded a cobol app for a mainframe it would work. It's only when you try and mix C, Java, perl and shell scripts that you get into trouble

frustrated me at 11:00 PM

10:41 am  
Blogger sensiblystoned said...

Two things that are alien to me in this post. Poetry and Coding. I havent read much poetry and hence I dont quite understand them easily. Coding...thats a totally different matter all together.

To phobiac: if you can mix poetry and coding together Im going to stay away from your blog. :)

M. if I ever understand your poem completely I shall comment on the poem as such.

11:15 am  
Blogger Dileepan said...

Whoa! You should let the other M take over your blog!

3:04 pm  
Blogger Senthil said...

Capital, M! ;)

5:56 pm  
Blogger m. said...

@morpheus - knowing you, more like the second. definitely! :d

@indu - thanks :-)

@phobiac - LOL... the other M chuckled. shes worse than i am at tech!

@ss - :-)

@dileepan: yello! regretting the monster you created huh! :p shall perversely continue writing. *sinister chuckles, exit stage left* and yeah, will tell her you liked it :-)

@senthil: lol,thanksh!

10:11 pm  
Blogger Woodworm said...

I had something clever to say - but senthil took it.. :)

So, if good can still be a word of appreciation...it is!! :)

4:29 am  
Blogger sensiblystoned said...

Duh!! (sratching my head) Are there two physical manifestations of M's or is it just your self introspective alter ego??

4:23 pm  
Blogger ~phobiac~ said...

@Sridhar
I dont think I have a problem there...I wuldn't code java or perl on MF ...reason I am not great with em !....thanks for the advice ;-)

@Stoned
poetry and coding r 2 things i hate ...cause am not good at em !...so better stop by my blog !

@ M....the original one..
hey tie up ur other M...shez writing poems !! agrr....

@M the other one..

hey the other M will try to stop u from penning poems...be careful ...and fight back !!


@others
see...tis very easy to get to girls to fight ;-)

9:14 pm  
Blogger Vetti Guy said...

How is the first stanza of the poem related to the second?

4:23 am  
Blogger m. said...

@mystic: cmon... live up to the name! read what you will into it...! ;-)

6:23 am  
Blogger wookie said...

"If you buried an
Autumn leaf
In the dark soil of
Longing,
Would it sprout ?"
Excellent- but can't stop thinking, why is longing dark?

4:34 pm  

Post a Comment

<< Home



Visit Greenpeace.org to help prevent environmental destruction.
Creative Commons License
This blog's content is protected. Whack this and you get whacked.