lament
The other M writes again :-)
All I have are
Words and phrases that flutter
Into my head, shaken
By some creative breeze.
An untidy heap.
They slip
Through the rake of my pen;
My thoughts crackle
With the static of frustration.
If you buried an
Autumn leaf
In the dark soil of
Longing,
Would it sprout ?
All I have are
Words and phrases that flutter
Into my head, shaken
By some creative breeze.
An untidy heap.
They slip
Through the rake of my pen;
My thoughts crackle
With the static of frustration.
If you buried an
Autumn leaf
In the dark soil of
Longing,
Would it sprout ?
Labels: my life
scribbled by m. at 7:41 am
13 Comments:
If you buried an
Autumn leaf
In the dark soil of
Longing,
Would it sprout ?
I think it just did...
humm...now why cant I write like that ?...
The other ~phobiac~ writes again :-)
All I have are
ctrl+c and ctrl+v that flutter
Into my brain, copied
from some creative coding.
An untidy logic.
They slip
Through the rake of my keyboard;
My compliers crackle
With the static of frustration.
If you coded a
cobol application
In the dark soil of
mainframes,
Would it work ?
@phobiac
If you coded a cobol app for a mainframe it would work. It's only when you try and mix C, Java, perl and shell scripts that you get into trouble
frustrated me at 11:00 PM
Two things that are alien to me in this post. Poetry and Coding. I havent read much poetry and hence I dont quite understand them easily. Coding...thats a totally different matter all together.
To phobiac: if you can mix poetry and coding together Im going to stay away from your blog. :)
M. if I ever understand your poem completely I shall comment on the poem as such.
Whoa! You should let the other M take over your blog!
Capital, M! ;)
@morpheus - knowing you, more like the second. definitely! :d
@indu - thanks :-)
@phobiac - LOL... the other M chuckled. shes worse than i am at tech!
@ss - :-)
@dileepan: yello! regretting the monster you created huh! :p shall perversely continue writing. *sinister chuckles, exit stage left* and yeah, will tell her you liked it :-)
@senthil: lol,thanksh!
I had something clever to say - but senthil took it.. :)
So, if good can still be a word of appreciation...it is!! :)
Duh!! (sratching my head) Are there two physical manifestations of M's or is it just your self introspective alter ego??
@Sridhar
I dont think I have a problem there...I wuldn't code java or perl on MF ...reason I am not great with em !....thanks for the advice ;-)
@Stoned
poetry and coding r 2 things i hate ...cause am not good at em !...so better stop by my blog !
@ M....the original one..
hey tie up ur other M...shez writing poems !! agrr....
@M the other one..
hey the other M will try to stop u from penning poems...be careful ...and fight back !!
@others
see...tis very easy to get to girls to fight ;-)
How is the first stanza of the poem related to the second?
@mystic: cmon... live up to the name! read what you will into it...! ;-)
"If you buried an
Autumn leaf
In the dark soil of
Longing,
Would it sprout ?"
Excellent- but can't stop thinking, why is longing dark?
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